Pretty Crazy

I did fond the second part random. Who is this? Is it her older? There are two different kinds of first person POV. One where the narrator knows everything (unlimited), ...

Wow . . . the ending is incredible . . . JB wanted Liz back. And like the fool I was, I had just led her right into the lion’s ...

Hi, I shall review your story since you reviewed mine. :D You have a lot of sentences that could be shortened. It would make it easier to read if there ...

That's a little church? :shock: Very nice picture. I agree, it's certainly a unique looking church. That's why I like it. :D I love the lighting in this too. It's ...

I actually liked this. The language is too strong for my taste, but it was interesting, so I read it. Well, I don't have any grammar comments I'd like to ...

Could you do this please? Thank you. :)

I like it. Sometimes a princess story can be boring, but you gave it some mystery. Kudos to you for that. :) I man stood next to her, holding a ...

I'm home watching TV. No one else is around, Dad is at work, and we have no neighbours. Our high-luxury apartment takes up the entire first floor. It's been a ...

Ooh this is good! This is a very creative Red Riding Hood twist. :P I don't really have anything else to say for a long, fancy review. But, hey, any ...

This is getting better. Thank you for explaining your characters further and not just getting on with the story. Well, actually, you did both here. You had some action and ...

This is fascinating. But your titles kind of a throw-off. I admit I almost didn't click on it when I saw it. But once I got into it, it was ...

Harder than you think, I went to a high school were there was 7,000 students. Another "were" mistake. It should be "where". :) I finished getting ready; brushing my teeth, ...

Mind reviewing this? Thanks you. :D

I have improved my writing a lot since I joined YWS! Thank you everyone! :P :elephant: :P :mrgreen:

I liked it. For some reason, I'm fascinated by stories with kidnapping. I'd like to know more about this story. Hopefully you'll explain some more later on. :) I think ...